Wednesday, November 7, 2012

Moment piece rough comp


Here is my rough comp for the moment piece. I  added a pose from ManYee's shot to see if it would work as a bg for her shot too.
  

  Oh and I did a bigger aspect ratio too. It feels less crowded. But what aspect ratio is everyone else doing? O_O
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  1. Danny MenNovember 7, 2012 at 11:20 AM

    I kind of like the angle of the face of ManYee's character more. Where is the point that you want people to look first?

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    1. Alex NunesNovember 7, 2012 at 12:09 PM

      I agree with Danny on which way she's looking, that way it doesn't direct your eye off the page. Instinctively, we want to look where she's looking.

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  2. ManYee WongNovember 7, 2012 at 2:03 PM

    I always like to use bigger aspect ratio,
    but the ratio you used for the top two panels seems better, it shows more space and make it feels less "pressure" .

    i think the size ratio of the characters seems off. i think either she should be smaller, or makes him bigger..

    the leaves next to her seems to be too big?(not sure) as i read it is from the background.

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